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« on: June 12, 2010, 04:13:47 AM »

I love it already and I've barely started reading it!!!  And I've already made an icon for it (I found a new toy on PSP!).  You'll see... soon.

MATTHEW!!!!

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“You walked right past him today, in the hallway,” she said quietly.  “You didn’t even see him.  If you searched your memories, he wouldn’t even exist.”

Him.  Pulling his hand back, Remin straightened his back, reflexively smoothing his robes.  No.  There was no him.  It was too early.

It is *not* too early, Remin!!!!  BUT THERE'S A *HIM* RIGHT THERE, RIGHT NOW!!!  *screams and dances with all of the Remin fans*

... Why does it sound like someone's having sex outside my building?!

My poor Remin *hugs him*.  You need to stop beating yourself up!  It'll happen!

Awe.

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“He was miserable.  He didn’t want to be a god if you couldn’t be one, too.  We tried to explain to both of you how important the role of royal high priest was, but neither one of you would listen.  You both begged us and nagged us and complained to us and cried all day.  Sadum was sure you’d never get to sleep, so she went to check on you, and she found you both in Orinakin’s bed with Selorin, figuring out how to right this terrible wrong.  Selorin thought that once Kudorin became a god, he’d be powerful enough to make you a god, too, and you were trying to decide if that would work.”

It does sound like something they would do  Red Love

LMAO!!!  Kudorin!!!!  Oh, I have to banner that quote, somehow!  Lost all common sense... of course he has... being in love robs you of your senses most of the time.

Chocolate... I haven't had any chocolate in... over two months...

I think I'll comment more later, lol.

I'm loving it!!

And now I want chocolate cake...

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« Reply #1 on: June 12, 2010, 04:27:21 AM »

 Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

The Sultan... deserves to be... mauled by Xio Voe.

*hugs Bade*

Frunga indeed.

Imagine what Xio Voe and Anosukinom will do when they find out about this!!  Ha!!!!!!!

He spat at Vade's feet.

HE SPAT AT VADE'S FEET?!?!?!?!??!

He's going to get kicked out of the palace, just you watch.

I can't believe he did that.  That son of a whoring bitch.  That... GOAT-FUCKER!!!!

Matthew, I can't believe you're going to leave us hanging with that one!!!!!

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« Reply #2 on: June 12, 2010, 07:01:52 AM »

 Biting Fingernails I KNOW!!!  Leave us hanging like that??  How dare he! Matthew you got some explaining to do!

 Giggle I can't wait till Kudorin and Xoe Voe make the Sultan into little mincemeat patties.  It's going to be awesome.

Spat at Vade's feet?Huh? Cursing Asshat. Grump

I loved that Remin's HIM is in the palace.  This is so exciting. Bouncy  I wonder if we will do the wait... wait... wait... or if that path will open up and Remin will walk his bright path soon.

And the conversation between Xoe Voe and Anosadum?  I so much like the image of Kudorin and Xoe Voe's life that she painted.  Pluck some weeds?  I think the weed that is the Sultan of Lorbain should be plucked right now.

Excellent chapter BUT I want the wedding still. Cry
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« Reply #3 on: June 12, 2010, 11:06:06 AM »

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“It is too early,” she said with a soft laugh.  “He shouldn’t be here for years.  It isn’t time for so much of this.  But a few things happened too quickly, and decisions were made, and…  And I’m not telling you that it’s time now.  It doesn’t have to be now.  You have time, a lot of time, you have years.  He has years...."
So....the Gold Book is not next?  Or is it?
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« Reply #4 on: June 12, 2010, 11:27:56 AM »

I feel like this chapter was just what I needed. I am suffused with new enthusiasm. Finally, some DRAMA! Lets talk about all the moments of WIN, shall we?

Remin's entire conversation with his divine mother was wonderful. *He* is here? SQUEEEEE!!! Then Kudorin throws this out:

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“You never had that conversation,” Kudorin said kindly.  “It didn’t happen.  I don’t want you to spend your time worrying about a conversation you haven’t had.”

            Really.  “How much time have you spent examining moments that have never and will never happen?  You’re always in a different reality.”

            “Because I understand all paths and I comprehend all times and I have the ability to keep everything in perspective.  You don’t.”

            “Oh, it’s just a silly thing like that?” Remin asked dryly.

            Laughing, Kudorin said, “Take me seriously.  I don’t want you to worry about a conversation you didn’t have and something that no one’s ever said.  All right?”

While it is super tempting to think that Kudorin is just saying that to ease Remin's mind and make it so that Remin won't dwell on his future husband being there already, I'm actually inclined to take Kudorin at his word. It is entirely possible that the conversation happened in Remin's head. However, since it happened when he was meditating, I'm inclined to think that the gods had a lot to do with what Remin imagined.  What's going to drive me nuts is whether or not HE is actually there or if the gods/Remin's subconscious just wanted to make a big honking point of how destructive Remin's personal distance can be. Or if it's both. Matthew, you're evil!

And I loved this:

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“…self-serving pretentious entitled…”  Orinakin was moving scrolls and stacks of paper across his desk with more vigor than was entirely warranted.  He was also scowling and muttering under his breath.  “…arrogant frunga fool…”

            Frunga?  Curious, Bade stepped farther into the room.  “Who are you calling a goat-fucker?”

            “Fucking shit,” Orinakin gasped, startled, staring at him.  “How in the world did you sneak up on me?”

 Rolling on the Floor Laughing How, indeed. I think that the drama around the Sultan's arrival are not the only Sultan-related things that will drive Orinakin crazy while that pompous ass is a guest in the palace.

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“I think that it’ll set the right tone, don’t you?” Bade asked.  “I mean, you’re sending your husband, not a bootblack, so it’s still respectful.  But you’re not at his beck and call anymore.  Kudorin’s marrying into the Jacacean Empire.  We don’t need to court the Sultan’s favor for anything anymore.  If we don’t like what he’s doing, we just have Xio Voe send in military forces.”

            “That’s not-”

            “No, of course not,” Bade said.  “But the Sultan thinks that everyone else thinks the way he does, and that’s what he’d do, in that situation.”

            “The royal diplomat always meets the Sultan at the balloon,” Orinakin said.

            “The Heir is ascending to the Anorian throne,” Bade said.  “It’s a new world.”


OMG, how Bade has grown! Having this level of diplomatic understanding now, when he was so sheltered before, is remarkable. I wonder how soon he and Orinakin will realize that Bade is growing closer to Setanoto. Also, his way of thinking demonstrates a keen awareness of his own place in the Anorian government, how high up he really is. The royal diplomat's spouse meets all the same people, sits at all the same dinners and, like we saw in the days between Bade and Orinakin's wedding and their departure, attends a lot of the same meetings. The royal diplomat's spouse has a good bit of power, if not authority, and I can't imagine that the other Siblings' spouses, with the obvious exception of the pharaoh's husband and wife, have as much involvement in the government simply by virture of being married to one of the Seven Siblings.

And Bade knowing this, being aware of and comfortable weilding his own power in the face of a hugely influential head of state like the Sultan, was seriously frelling sexy.  Drool

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The Sultan was furious.  So furious that he stood there in front of everyone, all of the priests and servants on the field, all of the incoming visitors, all of the Anorians and all of his own people, and called Bade a worthless, godforsaken shepherd, the son of no one and the representative of nobody, a childish ape who had learned to mimic the gestures of kings but would never know any power of his own.  Then he demanded that Bade return and send Orinakin to him.

The sultans'actions were awesome. He's such an asshole, an overinflated pompous jerk, and he is not considering how the Anorian-Jacacean joining will change his place in the world like Bade was talking about earlier. This will only be to his detriment. He is going to hang himself with how he acts while at this wedding. Insulting the royal diplomat's husband in public? Ranting at Vade, who was not wearing purple and was hanging out in the guest wing (two things Bade is very unlikely to be doing this close to the wedding) in front of everyone, which demonstrates that the sultan either does not know that Bade has a twin or simply does not care? And spitting at someone's feet? Spitting? He's so screwed.

I'm hoping for one or more of these to happen:

1: Kudorin is right there and responds to the sultan's disrespect of a dear friend, almost a brother, of the living god among us. Kudorin will be kind and maybe smiling because that's how he rolls, but he will not let the insult to Vade pass.

2: Xio Voe hears about it and responds to the sultan's disrespect of a dear friend of the future Emperor of the Jacacean Empire. He will be cold and distainful because that's how he rolls, but he will not let the insult to Vade pass.

3. Mindo hears about it and cuts off relations with Lorban because you know what? He's allied with Orina Anoris and his twin sons are close personal friends of Jacacea's Heir and he really doesn't need Lorbain.

4. Jonan is there and tries to explain the new facts of life to the sultan, perhaps unsuccessfully, and the sultan has a breakdown which renders him incompetent to rule, so Jonan takes over behind the scenes and this is how he changes Lorbain for the better just like Kudorin said he would back when Jonan was a suitor.

Okay, so the last two are a little farfetched, but I can hope. Either way, this chapter was perfect for getting me excited about ITL again. I can't wait to see what happens next week!
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« Reply #5 on: June 12, 2010, 11:30:39 AM »

One more line that was proabably my favorite of the entire chapter:

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Yes, well.  Chocolate cake.  The more for Remin, the better.  If that meant less for everyone else, that was a shame, certainly, but Remin couldn’t make himself feel very bad about it.  It was chocolate cake.  “I need it more than the rest of you, anyway.  I’m still trying to put on weight.”

 Rolling on the Floor Laughing Rolling on the Floor Laughing Rolling on the Floor Laughing

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« Reply #6 on: June 12, 2010, 12:49:21 PM »

Smiley I'm glad you like the banner!

I like your scenarios.  But I'm more inclined to think this:

 - The Sultan suddenly finds himself back in Lorbain with all his stuff, unable to get back to Orina Anoris until he's profusely apologized to Bade, Vade, Nosupolis, the Anorian royal family, and Xio Voe.

- Lightning suddenly strikes right at the Sultan's feet, scaring the living hell out of him (Kudorin could do it without physically hurting him).

- Vade decks the Sultan.

I'm in favor of all three lol.

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P.S. I still want chocolate cake!!!!
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« Reply #7 on: June 12, 2010, 02:18:21 PM »

I have a feeling that Vade is going to deck the Sultan, or try to do so anyway.   Laughing  I just wonder if Kudorin will freeze things to stop it or whatever.   Cool
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« Reply #8 on: June 12, 2010, 06:18:34 PM »

For Nosupolis' sake, I hope Vade doesn't hit the sultan! Not that that wouldn't be funny... Laughing Having a hotheaded violent prince won't do Nosupolis any favors. I'd love it, though, if Vade were to scold him or toss out a few slurs in Nosupilin, which the Anorians around him are likely to somewhat understand but the Lorbish probably won't. Imagine how the sultan will feel with Anorians giggling at him and having no idea why.  Rolling on the Floor Laughing
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« Reply #9 on: June 13, 2010, 08:08:20 AM »

*comes in with eyes closed.....*

Okay before I read anyone else's posts I'm getting my thoughts out before they scatter.  Thinking

First off Xio Voe realizing he needed a nap, got a real laugh out of this one as he tried to reason his way around it. Laughing

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Perhaps he was tired.  He hadn’t slept recently.  He’d used to go for long periods of time on very little sleep.  Napping with Anosukinom had made him weak.

            Then again, he was a human being, a mammal, and mammals required rest.

            Should he take a nap?

            It seemed ridiculous to stop in the middle of a productive day to sleep.

            On the other hand, people were healthier overall when they respected their body’s requests.

            He could continue on with his work; he wasn’t tired enough for it to affect his quality.  He might be too tired to recognize his mistakes, but that was unlikely.

            A nap.  Half an hour?  Two hours?  Anything longer than that seemed self-indulgent; one might as well no longer call it a nap.  He-

            “Ata.”  Anosukinom’s voice, shaking with laughter.

            Xio Voe suspected that Anosukinom was laughing at him.  “Yes, Your Majesty?”

            “Go to bed.  I’ll wake you in no more than two hours.”

            “I had not yet determined that I would take a nap.”

            “If you didn’t need one, you wouldn’t even be thinking about it.


And Remin's conversation with his mom that didn't really happen brought out some good points, that he needed to open up more to the possibilities.
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“I need you to open your heart.”  Her voice was firm, her gaze determined.  “I need you to open your soul.  I need you to breathe fresh air and jump at possibilities.”............................“You walked right past him today, in the hallway,” she said quietly.  “You didn’t even see him.  If you searched your memories, he wouldn’t even exist.”

            Him.  Pulling his hand back, Remin straightened his back, reflexively smoothing his robes.  No.  There was no him.  It was too early.

And her pointing out the the mystery man in question wouldn't have showed up for years if it hadn't been for Kudorin's wedding, means that he had only recently showed up and that we haven't met him yet.  Wink
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  “It is too early,” she said with a soft laugh.  “He shouldn’t be here for years.

And that in my mind only solidifies the Selorin/Vade coupling.  I never saw Vade as a possibility for Remin. In my recent reread, I really noticed all the little Selorin/Vade moments....and there are a lot of them. I now waiting for that big moment when Selorin realizes that Vade is the one. Red Love

And I want to slap the Sultan. What an ass! And I'm thinking someone else will happen upon this little drama in progress and I hope it's Xio Voe. I want to see how Xio Voe responds to the Sultan, after all in less then 30 minutes the Sultan had insulted 2 members of Kudorin's family (and Kudorin considers both Bade & Vade members of his family) and desecrated the home of Anosukonim. I think XV will have a few thoughts on this. No No



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« Reply #10 on: June 13, 2010, 08:26:58 AM »

Okay now that I've read everyone's posts....

My #1 scenerio is Kudorin sending Xio Voe to face the Sultan.

2. Kudorin shows up and publicly berates the Sultan.

3 Any of the other Siblings showing up and giving the Sultan a whatfor!

All of these have someone showing up and supporting Vade and showing the Sultan that Bade & Vade are highly regarded by Kudorin and that with Orina Anoris & Jacacea united the Sultan had better watch what he says & does. *nods*

Now lets have a wedding!!!  Dancey
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« Reply #11 on: June 14, 2010, 05:39:10 AM »

1. Yay for the wedding!  We need to have it *now*!

2. Anosukinom will never publically berate the Sultan.  But Xio Voe would have no such qualms, and I therefore *really* want him to stumble upon that situation *hint hint, Kudorin, hint hint!*  He would definitely stick up for his friends, but wouldn't get hotheaded about it.  He would be icy and... ohhh, I want him to find out!!!

3. Kudorin should imbue Rini with some divine power.  Rini would gladly shrink the... appendage (or lack, thereof) of the Suötan.  See how he feels for a change.

The endless question is... IS IT FRIDAY YET!?!

Or, in my case, is it Saturday yet, except that that's a Nick Carter song, and I really shouldn't go in that direction.

Okay, back to work I go... eh.  I wanna write!!!!

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« Reply #12 on: June 14, 2010, 08:02:05 AM »

Yep saturday for me too, since it usually gets posted long after I go to bed. I read it over breakfast before heading off to work.

Hmmmm wedding, need the wedding. But I supposed we have to get through the Emperor's arrival first... Tongue
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« Reply #13 on: June 14, 2010, 08:41:55 AM »

I don't think that shrinking the sultan's dick would matter because apparently it's already nothing impressive. Maybe Rini could give him a reverse Midas touch: all the gold he touches turns to lead.  Laughing

I think the wedding is still several chapters off, but now that the sultan is there, the Emperor isn't far behind and he was scheduled to arrive the day before the wedding. Then Xio Voe has to go through the ritual to initiate him to Kudorin's touch, which I really want to see. Then there's their first touch, which I personally don't want to happen in front of the crowd at the stadium because it will be such a profound, intimate moment for them.

But I can deal better now because the wedding is tangibly close. And the whole mess with the sultan is exciting and unexpected. Maybe that's why the last several chapters have filled me with despair: they covered predictable stuff like meeting the parents. But the sultan throwing a hissy fit? Hooyah!
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« Reply #14 on: June 14, 2010, 08:57:37 AM »

Hissy fit...*snickers*

So sad to see a grown man acting like a 2 year old. *shakes head*

The Emperor isn't going to be all that impressed meeting the sultan in person either.
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« Reply #15 on: June 14, 2010, 02:32:11 PM »

 Grump Grump Grump Grump

My team is currently losing against Paraguay, so I'm extremely pissed off.... I'm actually getting a migraine because I'm so upset...

Anyway...

Well, I still think that the Sultan should be covered in boils for spitting at Vade's feet, but that's me.  Not to mention what he said to Bade.

I agree: I can't wait until what I call 'The Touching Ritual'.  I want to know what they're going to feel when they first touch each other, and I can't wait for their first kiss.  I really really can't wait for that!

*goes back to this crazy match.  If Italy loses this, I quit all soccer-watching.  I don't care if it's their first match of the World Cup.*

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« Reply #16 on: June 20, 2010, 02:08:20 AM »

 Pet Pet  Oh Vanni  Cute Hug

I have been waiting for the first touch too.  I wonder if that will be done early, like the day before or right before with just Remin, XV & Kudorin before the ceremony, with the immediate family present or during the ceremony itself. However it is done it will be a profound moment.
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« Reply #17 on: August 15, 2010, 11:43:35 AM »

I really like the time spent and conversation between  Remin and Anosadum and awwww  Remin walked right past "him"....you tease Matthew  Angry Tongue

OMGosh...how dare the Sultan treat Bade that way and he spat at Vade's feet....wtf  Boxing  IM very proud of both of those boys for holding there composure they showed alot of strength and maturity  .......let XV at the Sultan  Evil

spat at my Vade... Grump
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« Reply #18 on: January 01, 2011, 03:16:53 PM »

Not bad, from June 12th to today to get  Remin HEA from possibility to probability. Party!

Truly I am happy that the Sultan has seemed to have become a non issue in the story.
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